Working till late hours has become common for people in different sectors of profession. It is not unknown that many individuals are investing so much time at work that they do not get enough time to spend at home. Such professional behavior can be beneficial for the freshers, who are looking for growth in their company. However, I believe every one should have a time frame for working hours, as this unethical way of working is causing a lot of mental as well as social problems among the people.
In today's cut-throat competition, everyone is eager to reach their job goal quickly, so in order to achieve it the employees put an extra effort to complete their work which results in working extra hours. For the learners, it can be a positive side to show to their employers, their interest in the given task. For instance, a training center of one of the MNC showed that the 64 percent of newly recruited employees worked for additional hours and gained promotion quickly than the rest of them.
On the other end, doing overtime at work can cause some ill effects too. One of the most common down side to it is depression. A recent study at oxford university showed that around 56 percent of people face depression due to their work pressure. This work load is due to the lack of man power required for that particular job. Working for more hours means one gets less time to spend with their friends and family resulting in to social problems.So, to overcome such situations one should maintain the working hour schedule and also, company should understand this scenario and hire number of candidates as per the requirement.
In conclusion, there should be a strict working hour pattern in a company in order to avoid serious consequences to their staff, such as depression. And, if we talk about the growth, it can be achieved in more or less time, in an ethical way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'downside'?
Suggestion: downside
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
... family resulting in to social problems.So, to overcome such situations one should...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an ethical way" with adverb for "ethical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...t can be achieved in more or less time, in an ethical way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71818181818 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55307121629 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569696969697 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.364712062 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.214285714 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186345722788 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684473704753 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402055726494 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120136872295 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532552684199 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.