It is true that, mostly people have their own mobile phones in this contemporary era. Wheather many individuals introspect that having conversations on mobile phones should be banned, others contemplate that it is a worrying trend. However in my opinion, it is our right that we can talk easily wherever we want.
To start with, attempting a phone call in emergency situations is not a wrong thing beacuse sometimes we may save any person life on a one call to an ambulance. Furthermore, we do not know the way of anything so it is a better way to talk with that person who knows the way of that place.
Looking at the other view, some people have no manners that how should they talk on public places because most of the person use abuse language while conversation on mobile phone so other people are disturbed. Some small children also wander with their parents but when they see that some people are abusing on phone so it is not healthy for coming generations. In addition, people talk continuously on mobile phone while driving and they drive very slow so it's also do traffic jams on road.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly, conversation should be banned in crowded area or public places this is a right thing yet. We must understand that in emergency situations conversation are compulsory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, while, in addition, in my opinion, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78761061947 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71514174116 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579646017699 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0020512281 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.2 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284017783867 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111604526662 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855528640861 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165474589814 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783637606936 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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