You had some building work done in your home, but you are unhappy with the outcome. Write a letter to the builder and say
describe the work done
why are you not happy?
What do you want the builder to do about it
Dear Mr. Smith,
This letter is written to you in regards of the work done in my home and the unexpected results that my family and I have found.
As a start, the paint job done was with a rough texture on the opposite of our specific request for it to be smooth. Not only the paint job gone wrong, but also the basement soundproofing installation is not enough for my son to practice rock and roll. Regarding the room splitting into two smaller rooms, the separating wall is tilted towards one of the rooms.
Undeniably, the results we have found after three weeks of work was not satisfying. Not to mention that all our specific requests submitted in the contract was neglected entirely. And the job quality was not up to your advertised high standard quality work.
All of these issues and problems needs to be addressed in an immediate manner. The paint job has to be removed and redone. As well as the basement soundproofing and the splitting wall installations needs to be corrected. Not only these mistakes requires fixing, but also no additional charges will be applicable in any of the cases.
Your quick attention to this notice letter is highly appreciated.
Best regards,
John Williams
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| 2020-09-07 | raeed.kriez | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...mith, This letter is written to you in regards of the work done in my home and the unexpe...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...we have found after three weeks of work was not satisfying. Not to mention that all our specific r...
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Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an immediate manner" with adverb for "immediate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...sues and problems needs to be addressed in an immediate manner. The paint job has to be removed and re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94736842105 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68043385003 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593301435407 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4621967206 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5384615385 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109480517228 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329507151472 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551004903535 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0524246544508 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072823249488 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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