You recently travelled on the local bus service in your town. You think the driver drove badly and was rude to the passengers. Write a letter to the manager of the local bus service. In your letter:
introduce yourself and say when the incident happened
describe what you saw and heard
say what you would like the bus company to do about it
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to make a complaint about my bad experience, which i faced recently while travelling through your bus service.
My name is Harpreet, and i have been a regular passenger of your buses from the last 10 years. Let me explain this incident to you in detail. This happened in the last Saturday when i was travelling from Noida sector 15 to sector 62 on bus number 332, which i boarded at around 3:30 PM. The behaviour of the bus driver was quite rude, as he was shouting so badly at everyone who was seating in the bus just because they were conversing with each other. Not only he was unprofessional, but also the bus speed was more than the standard limit. When we asked him to control it, he replied rudely to take off from the vehicle who has a problem. Further, i have also seen him taking tobacco while driving. By doing this, he was putting everyone's life into danger.
I want you to take strict action against him, and suspend his licence for at least 15 days as a punishment. I hope this would be enough to teach him a lesson for his unethical behaviour.
Looking forward to your immediate action on this matter.
Yours faithfully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...omplaint about my bad experience, which i faced recently while travelling through...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...This happened in the last Saturday when i was travelling from Noida sector 15 to ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...5 to sector 62 on bus number 332, which i boarded at around 3:30 PM. The behaviou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52073732719 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45027855999 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668202764977 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9819006907 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.75 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242592419319 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787644891333 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577214631806 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125494528657 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821064809702 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.