Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for people to choose jobs that come with high salaries even though they do not enjoy doing it than to choose jobs that they enjoy but come with low salaries.
In the present modern world, highly advanced technology, artificial intelligence and robots are dominating our society. As a result, the job opportunities are becoming limited as robots do a faster and highly efficient work. Some people believe it is wiser to search for unexcused and difficult jobs with increased pay rather than chasing the dream job with low salary. With the challenges we face in today's world, i would choose to work for a high paid job even if the work schedule is dull and mundane. I will illustrates several reasons for my beliefs in the following paragraph.
Firstly, the government authorities in developing countries are finding it difficult to provide sustainane for their people. With the inflation going higher, people have a significant liabilities. Hence, a well paid job will oversee the essential requirements in a family. For instance, my current job with Yahoo as a project manager doesn't make be excited to go to office everyday. However, the pay cheque at the end of the month covers my home loan and personal loans.
Secondly, the education is highly expensive in the developing counties too. One needs to prepare and plan in advance for their offsprings schoola nd college education. For example, the salary provided by my employer takes care of my 19 year's old child's medical college expense. If i have to quit and chase my dream to become a painter, it would have a significant impact on my family.
Finally, with the improve in the health and quality of life, people are living a longer life. However, severalbenigh diseases like diabetes, hypertension, etc. have developed chronically. As a result signigicant amout of people are thriving on medicines and hospital needs which are impractically expensive. For instance, if my employeer had not provided me a promotion and a pay hike last year, i would not have een able to support my father's sudden hypoglycaemic attact from last month, which called for emergency hospitalisation and expensive treatment done on him for 7 days.
In conclusion, today's modern society is encouraging fast and efficient work. As a result the robots are been used to cater their needs, which lead to reduced job opportunities and intense competion for the remaining limited jobs available. Hence, more and more people are willing to give up their dream job and rather work for a monotonous work which will fetch them high salary to support their needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'illustrate'
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'liability'?
Suggestion: liability
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07462686567 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87109078539 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5604009186 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7272727273 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228016561211 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060886572144 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638508692298 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124981369342 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872946428899 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.