Some people prefer to spend holidays in resorts where everything is organized for them and they take little interest in the country they are visiting. Others prefer to travel around the country and to see how the people live, to get to know their customs and traditions and cuisine.
Write an essay on which type of foreign travel you think is best for both the tourist and the local community.
one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge in the foreign people charging more than local people in a country. there is a wide spread of worry that this will lead to a myriad concerns in the society. In my opinion, charging more for foreign tourist has more negative impacts then positivites in the society.
On the one hand, one of the most significant benefits of tourist visiting cultural and historical destination has more benefit in exchanging the foreign currency. For example, people unlike in the past now has more ways to promote tourism in a country, thanks to those people who worked volountarily for protecting the indentification of culture.
On the other hand, there are a number of arguments in the favour of my stance. one of the most preponderant one is environmental pollution has more negative consequences in the community in various ways. Firstly, people may got chance to be sufferred from various kinds od communicable diseases like typoid, flues. According to ''times magazine of December 2018 edition'', the proportion of American people visiting to the next country has dropped by 15 per cent to 10 per cent in today's world. Secondly, a large population has lost enthusiam in exploring to other countries due to expensiveness.
Lastly, in my opinion, the government of Australia is taking great initiative in educating its citizens about the providing the good services to the tourist. citizens and local people people " style="caret-color: rgb(85, 85, 85); color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">are encouraged to spend a time in showing good behaviour and respect to the foreign. So that they will come back again.
In view of outlined above, one can conclude that despite of having some benefits of tourism in the country and providing reasonable price are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 31.9359605911 172% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 306.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16013071895 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13739276658 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562091503268 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3565226341 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.785714286 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155543457065 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484409931273 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332393529692 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786375777311 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194015355296 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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