"According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising."
This the memo in which the sugesstion is given from the advertising director of supersceen movie production company pertaining to augment the awareness in the people of good movies stated by the comany. Company stating the paradox of the argument that positive responce from people are aufgmenting even though number of movie viewers are attenueting over the past years. To evaluate the argument completely we must find the solution of three question that may conducive to determine the paradox. if the germane data not found in further argument then the suggestion of increasing budget to create awareness will not hold the water.
Firstly, erstwhile if very less number of people attended superscreen movie then it is necessary to provide how much people have attended with repsective of past year ? the capacity and condition of thetre is vaible to hold large number of people at he same time ? or may this result of few prople are attending the movie is taken from few thetre of superscreen company. we need to identify the number of superscreen thetre and in what condition they are? the survey is required to determine the reasons behind it. it might possible that the number might taken just for 3-4 movies and not for the all movies.
Secondly, even if company is claiming that they are receving more positive reviews contrasting the number of viewers, the internet might playing dominant role in this. people might watching the movies over the application of superscreen movie thetre rather than physically going in the thetre. Moreover, the consition of movie thetre is ameiable? company claming about the qaulity of movies but there is no evidence of ratings of the movies or survey report which can eloborate the details. It is possible that the consiton and service provided by thetre is drastically worsen over the years thus people might prefering to watch movies online rather than offilne.
Moreover, Has company changed the time and dates of movies overthe past years? This can affect the theatre on largerscale if timing and dates are not sutable to viewers. To evaluate the argument more survey report must provide by the author for timing and dates with the qualityu chech of theatre. additionally, even if company allocate grater share of its budget to reaching people through advertising it dose not imopact directly and argument will fall apart.
In toality, there is need to incisive report and survery of ambience of thetre, timing and date of movies are they suitable with local public and ration scle of number of thetres present is certain radius of geopgraphical context to determine whether the suggestion is conducive or not.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 439 350
No. of Characters: 2185 1500
No. of Different Words: 200 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.577 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.977 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.5 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 181 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 120 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 78 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 36.583 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.768 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.388 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.619 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.142 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ceen movie production company pertaining to augment the awareness in the people o...
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Line 1, column 499, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...may conducive to determine the paradox. if the germane data not found in further a...
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Line 1, column 499, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...may conducive to determine the paradox. if the germane data not found in further a...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...vie then it is necessary to provide how much people have attended with repsective of...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...attended with repsective of past year ? the capacity and condition of thetre is vai...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
...rge number of people at he same time ? or may this result of few prople are atten...
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Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...from few thetre of superscreen company. we need to identify the number of superscr...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... thetre and in what condition they are? the survey is required to determine the rea...
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Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have taken' or 'take'?
Suggestion: have taken; take
...it might possible that the number might taken just for 3-4 movies and not for the all...
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Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...et might playing dominant role in this. people might watching the movies over the appl...
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Line 4, column 347, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Company
... consition of movie thetre is ameiable? company claming about the qaulity of movies but...
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Line 4, column 570, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'worsened'.
Suggestion: worsened
...rvice provided by thetre is drastically worsen over the years thus people might prefer...
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Line 6, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as company changed the time and dates of movies overthe past years? This can af...
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Line 6, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ny changed the time and dates of movies overthe past years? This can affect the...
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Line 6, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...survey report must provide by the author for timing and dates with the qualityu c...
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Line 6, column 304, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Additionally
...tes with the qualityu chech of theatre. additionally, even if company allocate grater share ...
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Line 6, column 408, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t to reaching people through advertising it dose not imopact directly and argumen...
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Line 6, column 413, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doses'?
Suggestion: doses
...reaching people through advertising it dose not imopact directly and argument will ...
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Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...argument will fall apart. In toality, there is need to incisive report and sur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 55.5748502994 124% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2227.0 2260.96107784 98% => OK
No of words: 439.0 441.139720559 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0728929385 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55011220921 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 204.123752495 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478359908884 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 705.55239521 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9003478653 57.8364921388 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.35 119.503703932 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.95 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95 5.70786347227 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.25449101796 362% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240450615462 0.218282227539 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785793731826 0.0743258471296 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682321126543 0.0701772020484 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132796724297 0.128457276422 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642928626561 0.0628817314937 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.3799401198 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 98.500998004 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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