A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He / She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
1. why you think your friend would enjoy camping.
2. Describe some possible disadvantages.
3. Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend.
Dear David,
I’ve heard that you are planning your first camping trip to Yellowstone National Park this summer. I’m glad to give you some advice based on my previous camping experiences.
Camping is an unforgettable experience and a great chance to get away from the hustle and bustle of the city. Especially for an occupied person like you. It will be a great opportunity to lay back for a few days, besides enjoying the group activities available. On my last trip, I truly enjoyed the music show by the fire; It was a wonderful experience.
I must also warn you in advance that the nearest convenient store is 20 km away from the campground, so carry sufficient water and food supplies. Moreover, I must mention that you won't have access to any source of power, so make sure you've charged your electronic devices before you leave.
I'd love to accompany you on your upcoming trip; but I'm afraid I can't. I've just been invited to my colleague’s wedding.
Hope to see you soon,
Sam
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- A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer He she has asked for your advice Write a letter to your friend In your letter Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday Describe some possible 73
- A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer He she has asked for your advice Write a letter to your friend In your letter Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday Describe some possible 89
- A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer He She has asked for your advice Write a letter to your friend In your letter 1 why you think your friend would enjoy camping 2 Describe some possible disadvantages 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77586206897 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64812843819 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.729885057471 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3321034823 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5454545455 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215015204122 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724300248361 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629703299347 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109747279018 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743271183292 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.