A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday
describe some possible disadvantages
say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear Shain,
Hello!!! I received your letter yesterday. Finally, you got time from your hectic schedule and decided to go on camping. You can't imagine how much happy I am after reading this.
I know your happiness lies in 'Doing By Own'. Also, I've noticed several times that you are always keen to know about nature.While camping you can explore the regions you haven't even heard so far. Moreover, one also has to manage everything by own. For example- cutting wood, cooking food, etc.
I'm sure camping will give you immense pleasure by satiating your desire for both.
But, don't forget to carry comfortable shoes and some extra clothes with you. Because, camp sites usually have high slopes and rough surfaces. So, if fallen, not only you may get serious injury but can also have your clothes torn.
One more thing, please let me know, whether you are going with colleagues or alone? In case alone, then i couldn't wait to go with you. Some camp sites near to your place are Shakhar, Quadriya farms. You can also consider these places while choosing sites.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours truly,
Surbhi
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| 2023-02-18 | tsabatt | 73 | view |
| 2022-11-20 | kuldip.kumar@hotmail.com | 89 | view |
| 2022-05-20 | minhhh123 | view | |
| 2022-02-21 | shain | 78 | view |
| 2022-02-21 | borntoshine | 100 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...edule and decided to go on camping. You cant imagine how much happy I am after readi...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...r happiness lies in Doing By Own. Also, Ive noticed several times that you are alwa...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...ou are always keen to know about nature.While camping you can explore the regions you...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ou are always keen to know about nature.While camping you can explore the regions you...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...camping you can explore the regions you havent even heard so far. Moreover, one also h...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...mple- cutting wood, cooking food, etc. Im sure camping will give you immense plea...
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Line 5, column 6, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y satiating your desire for both. But, dont forget to carry comfortable shoes and s...
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Line 6, column 107, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...eagues or alone? In case alone, then i couldnt wait to go with you. Some camp sites ne...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... while choosing sites. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours truly, Surbhi
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Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... forward to hear from you. Yours truly, Surbhi
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80310880829 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10463489469 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.746113989637 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5507710001 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.5294117647 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.3529411765 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283837103793 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938037743001 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726062945463 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140385784149 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667861209185 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.