Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my immense happiness after learning skills at your cooking school.
I enjoyed learning about making different types of cuisines such as Chinese, Continental, and Indian. I was a rookie in cooking as earlier I do not even know the information about adding an adequate amount of spices in the meals. Learning from this course, I was able to eradicate my vulnerability in cooking which I had earlier.
After completing this course, I have been daily cooking and preparing dishes for myself. But before that, I used to make only Maggi and sandwiches because it is an effortless task in cooking. And, these two types of meals were not giving me the proper amount of calories on daily basis in my life. However, nowadays, I prepare lunch and dinner for me and my roommates where those recipes which I learned at your school gave me a wonderful skill as home-cooked meals are healthy meals. Plus, preparing meals at home reminds me of my mother in India, and it is one of the best memories I will have in my entire life.
I was hoping to learn more at your school, and I search that you are about to start a new batch for Japanese Food. Unfortunately, I try to find the course online to make a registration but did not get any information. I would request you please add this course and confirm my registration as a student in this Japanese cooking learning
session at your school.
I am looking forward to hearing a positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ch as Chinese, Continental, and Indian. I was a rookie in cooking as earlier I do...
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Line 9, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tudent in this Japanese cooking learning session at your school. I am looking ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72284644195 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67985314365 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580524344569 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3214110128 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0714285714 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23064847887 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777296601372 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790421843472 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131668308347 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971804787826 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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