Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Smartphones have caused more harm than good to our society.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is true that many people thing that smartphones affected the society in a negative way. However, I honestly dissagree with that statement. I support the idea that smartphones has a possitive impact in our everyday lives. I think this way for some reasons that I will elaborate in the essay.
To began with, smartphones allow people to communicate and stay connected with their friends and family all over the world. From my personal perspective, smartphones are the most beautiful invention that people discovered. I feel this way because those divises help me to easily stay in contact with my mother and my friends who lives back in my country. For example, using my phone I can talk and see my mother. There are too many features that helps you to do this. I usually use Skype or Viber, they both have the option to turn on the camera, so we can see each other. I use it every single day, and it helps me to feel less homesick, because I can at least see and talk to the people I love the most.
Also, smartphones are good for study. They have a lot of space where you can save books and other study materials and you have them always with you. Whenever you have time you can easy read on the screen. They are more practical then the books. If you have a smartphone you do not have to carry have books with you. For instance, the other day I was at work and during my lunch break I was able to read some pieces of my anatomy book, because I am preparing for the exam I will have next week. So, I did not need to have the book with me, just my phone was enough to read the whole chapter of heart structure.
Finally, the mobile divices like smartphones with help you to find the way when you are driving. Using their navigators we are able to move free arount the country, without having the fear of getting lost. The other day, my friend who lives in Canada wanted to come over to my house in Chicago. I only needed to give her the right address and she was able to find my home without any effort. So, the smartphone have a significant role in our lives. They making our lives more enjoyable and less stresful.
To sum up, it is evident that just like any other thing, the smartphones have their drawbacks, but the benefits we have from them overcome their cons. I would suggest to everyone have a smartphone because you would not comply, you will be so satisfied with all the pros they have.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...g that smartphones affected the society in a negative way. However, I honestly dissagree with tha...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ials and you have them always with you. Whenever you have time you can easy read on the ...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
... on the screen. They are more practical then the books. If you have a smartphone you...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...They are more practical then the books. If you have a smartphone you do not have t...
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Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help you find' instead.
Suggestion: help you find
...he mobile divices like smartphones with help you to find the way when you are driving. Using the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, honestly, however, if, so, then, at least, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 43.0788530466 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34222222222 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2894109437 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495555555556 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5167266203 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1538461538 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248261738497 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803023780667 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598885089803 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149806582031 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352587777628 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.