There is no shortage of the opinion on smart phones are beneficial or has adverse effect on society. In my opinion, smartphones plays an important role in daily life to make work easier. I feel this way for the following two reasons, which i will explore in the following paragraphs.
First, By using mobile phones we give and take orders in restaurants and hotels. Since long time ago there were not smartphones and the waiters in restaurants use the piece of paper and pen for taking the orders from the costumers. As a result, more worker is needed to run the hotels and restaurants. Furthermore, order from the clients taken by the use of paper and pen is much slower because of writing on the paper. My personal experience is the good example of this. Ten years ago, when i were work in the hotel as a waiter, i took order from the guest on the piece of copy by using pen which is so boring and time consuming due to which i cannot work much faster although i want to take more and more order. Moreover, to serve many people at once is not possible because it took more time. So, now a days it is very easier to work in restaurants by using smart phones.
Second, smartphones can use in navigation process by tourists which are visiting in totally new place. When we are starting our journey, we need more information about our location and route which can be easily find by using smart phones. With the help of smartphones we can locate and share present location so that our friends easily can reach to us. Drawing from my personal experience, five years ago, we were starting our journey from Kathmandu to Gosaikunda. We are 12 in our group one of our friend is missing after Sundarijal and we call him by using smartphones and tell him to share his present location, by using this location sharing property we can catch up our friend. As a result, we meet again with the help of smart phone.
In conclusion, the Smartphones have a positive effects on society . This is because it makes our daily work easier and it helps in the tourism to find best route and location.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The most important goal of education is to teach people how to educate themselves 42
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Smartphones have caused more harm than good to our society Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48812664908 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48066623836 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501319261214 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4129283802 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5263157895 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9473684211 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163919822074 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551433639155 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347229368875 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945475386065 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245876135722 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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