Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “When people succeed, it is entirely because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with their success.” Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Every person in this world have a certain dream for which he is working. To achieve this dream one needs to put a lot of efforts and had to give up many luxuries of life. I believe that success is only achieved by hard work and determination. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, finishing the assigned task on time can attract people towards you. Studies suggest that a person who is punctual and completes his work on time becomes the the most admired personality among the people. As a result, that person is considered as responsible which is a good for promotion in the company. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About two years ago, when I was a fresher in the corporate field I was going through my training period. My mentor use to give me many number of tasks which each needs to be completed before the next session begins. I used to struggle a lot in finishing the work and often go to the office with just two hours sleep but completed each task assigned to me. In the end, when I completed my training I was completely exhausted and thought of dropping from the company, but I was not aware of the perception I have created of myself in the eyes of my mentor, he assigned me the job of manager straight after training period. Therefore, till today I owe to my hard work and determinatiomn which I showed during my initial process.
Secondly, many students aim for studying in their dream universities but only few are able to achieve their dream. This is because preparing for the entrance exam requires patience and perseverance, which is shown by only few students. For instance, recently, my brother and his friend was preparing for the entrance exam of a university which requires a vast amount of study material to be completed within 3 months. As a result, my brother prepared for it by studying day and night whereas his friend though that he will only study important topics and as the exam is multiple choice he can guess the answers which he didn't knew. However, when the result was declared my brother successfully cleared the exam and his friend miserably failed. Therefore, this shows how the hard work is necessary for achieving one's dream and luck plays negligent role.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that determination is important to achieve our desired goal. This is because hard work creates positive perception of us which can help us succeed in the long run and because laborious efforts will only be going to give us what we dream of.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: the
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Suggestion: the; the
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Suggestion: used
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Suggestion: many numbers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64317180617 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61447713598 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495594713656 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7188011086 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.380952381 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.619047619 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114123734922 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396094242681 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395641964063 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705391373991 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198533775519 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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