Your friend from England is making a business trip to your town. She has never visited your country before and wants to know what you can do together in her free time.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
– describe some activities for her free time
-suggest some restaurants/food in your town
– Offer to meet her
Dear Jane,
I hope you are doing great. I was delighted about your visit to India next week. I told to my mother and she started making traditional snacks for you.
You are staying for a couple of weeks in India. I suggest you stay with us in Delhi rather than living in the hotel as your meeting is also here and your company is not far away from my home. There are numerous historical monuments such as India Gate, Red Fort, Humayun’s Tomb, and other exciting places to visit. You will definitely love these. Moreover, there are various antique shops where you can purchase native traditional and cultural items.
Furthermore, I know you love food very much. Behind our house, there is a small market where you can taste the different types of foods like Chinese, Indian Continental, and Italian. I hope you enjoy this trip and we both make it memorable.
I started planning and preparation for your arrival. It would be great if you send the arrival date and time so that I will come to the airport to receive you.
Please write again soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Emily
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| 2020-09-14 | navpreet12 | 88 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed about your visit to India next week. I told to my mother and she started makin...
^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e write again soon. Yours Faithfully, Emily
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70157068063 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36980262357 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701570680628 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6108851482 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.8666666667 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7333333333 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256892184322 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084444321986 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632735861348 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123395565557 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596610753781 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.09 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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