The line chart illistrates how many books man and women read at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.
As can be seen clearly, during 2011 to 2013,the number of books read by women was always higher than men's.However,after a year.this number decreased rapidly and had distance with men's.
In 2011, the number of books women read started at around 3000 .After , it rised quite quickly.Having the same trend, there was a moderate growth in 2013 and got the peak at 10000 in the same year. However, women read much less books in the last year (2014).The number of book they read decreased dramatically to 8000.
In term of men,in the first year,they read less books than women.Nevertheless, there was a slight increase in the number of books men read of 1000 after a year. And then,in 2013,this number rised hurriedly to 10000 and got the same point with women.However, there was a speedy growth in the number of books men read and got the highest point at 14000 in 2014.At this time, the gap of the number of books between men and women read was the highest.
Overall, there was a strong upward trend in the number of books read by men. Although women read more books than men in 2011, their reading fell to below the level of men in 2014.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, nevertheless, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61883408072 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54418855594 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488789237668 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1851569679 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.75 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.875 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348157393485 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203531051636 0.103423049105 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677306255812 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24228362296 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735360834665 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.91 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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