The pie charts provide information about the ages structure of the populations of Yemen and Italy respectively in 2000 together with the projected in 2050.
Overall speaking, the population of children in Yemen and Italy both record a decrease from 2000 to 2050, while the number of the old showed an upward trend on the contrary. In 2050 people aged 15 to 59 are predicted to occupy the main proportion of the population in Yemen and Italy.
The proportion of children in Yemen was the largest, taking up for nearly half of the population, though it is predicted to decline to 37% in 2050. With the other age group increased, the proportion of people aged from 15 to 59 increases consistently from 46.3% to 57.3%, and they are predicted to be the main part of the population structure in Yemen in 2050. The old people aged beyond 60 are predicted to record a slight growth from 3.6% in 2000 to 5.7% in 2050.
The populations of young adults had always been the largest part in Italy since 2000 and will sustain to 2050, tough with a fall in proportion from 61.6% to 46.2%. The old in Italy in 2000 took up almost a quarter of the population and will increase nearly twofold to 42.3% in 2050.
At the same time, the proportion of children stayed below 15% in 2000 in Italy and is predicted to fall to 11.5% in 2050.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...fall in proportion from 61.6% to 46.2%. The old in Italy in 2000 took up almost a q...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 33.7804878049 186% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53333333333 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52465619221 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445833333333 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1855985424 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.888888889 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299436784244 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14635616054 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074009076552 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19611182449 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801862732021 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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