It is true that in modern families, both parents have full-time jobs to achieve a better financial situation and as a result their children have to be raised by grandparents. This phenomenon affects the family in both positive and negative ways which I will explain in this essay.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that having grandparents to take care of the children can be advantageous to some extent. First, looking after the grandchilren keeps the grandparents energetic and vibrant because they can engage in some bonding activities with their dearing grandchildren. They will no longer suffer from loneliness and depression which is very common at that age. Second, young children can also benifit from the upbringing of their grandparents. The elderly is better at incultivating values in young children by teaching them many moral lessons. This will instill kindness and compassion in children, which can make them become all-rounded individuals in the future.
On the other hand, it is generally seen that grandparends tend to be overindulgent and may spoil the young children. If a child is familiar with being fulfilled all of the unreasonable demands and derires, he or she will easily become independent and dissatisfied with everything in their lives. Another disadvantage of parents letting their children raised by grandparents is that there is likely to be a lack of interaction between parents and their offsprings. This may have a negative impact on children's development emotionally since they believe thay are not loved by their father and mother.
In conclusion, I believe that while it is beneficial if grandparents look after their grandchildren when parents are preaccupied with their work, its negative effects on children should be taken in to consideration.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: ziahasan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... child is familiar with being fulfilled all of the unreasonable demands and derires, he or...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, second, so, still, while, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26573426573 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07304268985 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559440559441 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.601591162 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.846153846 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252828965544 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922928762017 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753923725658 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167467899469 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03797099896 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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