In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion on this?
Going outside the house for a teenager without having an adult with them is restricted in some parts of the US. In my opinion, restricting the teenagers from going outside the house in the night is right because of the increasing crime rate which we will discuss in this essay.
Robbery gangs are operating actively in the night. Robbery cases are exploding and teenagers are the primary victim. Robbing at gunpoint is the most common way, as the victim has no choice other than getting robbed. In Sept 2019, police record 3 back to back rob at gunpoint cases in one week, and in all the 3 cases the victim is a teenager.
Other than that, kidnapping and asking for money are also trending in areas of New York. Just like robbery gang kidnapping gangs are also activate in the night and target is the alone kids and teenagers. The goal of these gangs is straightforward, they just want money from their parents to release otherwise, they just kill the victim. In the Chicago area in Sept 2019 police found a dead body with deep wounds around the neck. After investigating police found that the dead body is the victim of kidnapping and kidnappers just kill and throw the body because the victim’s family refuses to pay the amount to the kidnappers.
In conclusion, imposing a curfew is the right decision for teenager’s safety, and it also justifies the rule of having an adult with them while going out as an adult can handle the dangerous situations pretty well.
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- In Some Areas Of The US A Curfew Is Imposed In Which Teenagers Cannot Be Out Of Doors At Night Band 9 IELTS Essay Sample 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 566, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'victims'' or 'victim's'?
Suggestion: victims'; victim's
...ust kill and throw the body because the victims family refuses to pay the amount to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64503816794 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37640404706 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538167938931 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2689556333 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.416666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200176925412 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640272109855 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552960827091 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120685170395 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064886830989 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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