You study at a university and often use the university library. The library closes very early in the evening and you are not
able to stay there and study.
Write a letter to the Manager of the library. In the letter,
Describe who you are and the details of your university course
Explain the problem at the library
Suggest what you think the Manager should do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter in connection with our school SP library and its working hours. I am a student in the MBA degree course at your esteemed university and I am currently in the second SP semester of the first year.
I have regularly been utilizing the university's various +S facility including the SP library for studying and conducting group project SP disucssions with my fellow peers. Although this space is very useful, I have been facing some difficulties due to the its early closing hours. Our mid-term exams are around the SP cornre and we need the SP library along with its SP recources to get more information on the topics and complete our assignments.
I would like to request ^ you to please consider extending the office hours till 9 o'clock in the evening and also would like to suggest an outdoor seating area which can be open WC up till late for the students to have a place to conduct SP thier group activities. I hope you take my suggestions into consideration and look into this matter WC as your convenience.
I look forward to your positive revert
Your faithfully
Karry Dave
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter in connection w...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e second SP semester of the first year. I have regularly been utilizing the univ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ond SP semester of the first year. I have regularly been utilizing the unive...
^
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
...ve been facing some difficulties due to the its early closing hours. Our mid-term exams...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he topics and complete our assignments. I would like to request ^ you to please ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...sider extending the office hours till 9 oclock in the evening and also would like to s...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...his matter WC as your convenience. I look forward to your positive revert ...
^
Line 9, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I look forward to your positive revert Your faithfully Karry Dave
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our positive revert Your faithfully Karry Dave
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78172588832 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71343289764 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644670050761 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.9547808503 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 76.5299724578 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17169431156 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658878835378 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370124477617 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796908111537 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474378668117 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter in connection w...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e second SP semester of the first year. I have regularly been utilizing the univ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ond SP semester of the first year. I have regularly been utilizing the unive...
^
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
...ve been facing some difficulties due to the its early closing hours. Our mid-term exams...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he topics and complete our assignments. I would like to request ^ you to please ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...sider extending the office hours till 9 oclock in the evening and also would like to s...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...his matter WC as your convenience. I look forward to your positive revert ...
^
Line 9, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I look forward to your positive revert Your faithfully Karry Dave
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our positive revert Your faithfully Karry Dave
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78172588832 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71343289764 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644670050761 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.9547808503 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 76.5299724578 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17169431156 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658878835378 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370124477617 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796908111537 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474378668117 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.