You study at a university and often use the university library. The library closes very early in the evening and you are not able to stay there and study.
Write a letter to the Manager of the library. In the letter,
Describe who you are and the details of your university course Explain the problem at the library
Suggest what you think the Manager should do
Dear Mr. Jackson,
I am writing to request to keep the library open unitl the late night during the next month.
I am a post graduate student and I am living in the off-campus accommodation. My course was started in the late January of this year which is a major in Computer Science. As this course is researched based, I need to use the library often to read the term papers from the archive available in it.
During the last semester, there were no problem in the timings as most of the curriculum was lab based which does not require to use the resources from the library. However, now I need to use the computer in the evening because my classes runs all day. The major exams will be commenced in the next month.
I would really appreciate if you could allow the library to open until midnight in the upcoming month. It will be helpful for all the students who will be appearing for their exams.
I hope you will consider this request and take suitable action at the earliest.
Yours sincerely, Apoorva Chikara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
...um was lab based which does not require to use the resources from the library. However...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e helpful for all the students who will be appearing for their exams. I hope you will consi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51891891892 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41152576964 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7553179159 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150673227549 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502050435157 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571725645177 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711815414857 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446486438227 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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