.Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
* offer to help him/her to move
* explain how exactly you can help
* ask him/her some questions about the new house
Hello Tim,
I hope you’re doing good! I just got to know that you’re moving out of York Street. I’m really excited to see you as my new neighbour, welcome!
Recently, my current project is delivered, and I’ve applied for a week's leave which is accepted. After visiting my aunt's house on Saturday, I am thinking to get over to your place to help you packing up things.
You know, I am good at putting up things in order so I will help you up with the closest and the kitchen stuff. However, I can also suggest you rent the movers as early as possible because they’ve got a resource crunch on the weekends.
Do you know, Lily? She lives in the same vicinity and can help you to complete the paperwork. Are you renting the whole apartment or just the room? Well! ask for free internet services in your monthly rental.
See you soon, Buddy!
With love,
Apoorva
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... that you’re moving out of York Street. I’m really excited to see you as my new n...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to pack' or 'pack'.
Suggestion: to pack; pack
...g to get over to your place to help you packing up things. You know, I am good at pu...
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Line 9, column 155, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ask
...whole apartment or just the room? Well! ask for free internet services in your mont...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5786163522 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30204144238 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685534591195 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7263705587 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171368649565 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654864548264 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387814428315 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906677532083 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352065971708 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.