A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
* tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
* say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
* explain how to apply for the job
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Hello Tom,
I hope you are well and thank you for writing the letter last week. I’m just writing to reply about the job opportunity which you asked me in the letter.
As you know, we both are fond of writing computer programs, and I remembered how we kept pondering on the assignments related to it whole night. Do you still remember, James? He is currently associated with a local company THAT needs a software developer to design and architect their retailing system. Although they need a more experienced guy, they really liked your resume, and the projects you recently completed.
When you shared with me the roles and responsibility last time we caught up on Skype, I made a copy of it and tried to find similar job options. You will love this job as It will be providing you the accommodation for free, meals included, health and medical benefits, and the joining bonus. James, he shared the opening with me and asked for the referrals so I thought to give yours.
You must be happy about it! It’s simply easy to apply for this position; i’m sharing the link attached to this letter where you can go and fill out the form. With in a week, a call letter will be sent to you for the interview process.
Let’s catch up soon and take care!
Best wishes,
Apoorva
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 74, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I’m'?
Suggestion: I’m
...simply easy to apply for this position; i’m sharing the link attached to this lette...
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Line 11, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Let’s catch up soon and take care! Best wishes, Apoorva
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so, still, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62173913043 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43478649068 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626086956522 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5020742587 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5833333333 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418088139234 0.216113520407 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148296861397 0.0766984524023 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919645694166 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215380221935 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128318028703 0.0580467560999 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.