12. Many educational institutions give greater importance to subjects related to science and ignore subjects such as drama and literature.
Why is this?
Is this a positive or negative development?
Science has been giving us a great deal of knowledge associated with our surrounding, health, extraterrestrial activities, and many more. So, more universities are becoming active participants to carry out extensive research for such information, which could be essential for human beings. While some universities still believe that drama and literature are core pillars for humanity, others feel it is insignificant to keep them in curriculums. In my view, giving more weight to the subjects related to science could bring enormous benefits to the educational providers as well as to society and it is a positive trend that is exponentially soared recently.
Certainly, more students are attracted towards science and technology, but there are many who are still unable to get enrolled in this field. To overcome this gap, universities are providing great ranges of courses in STEM although not all the learners are not passionate about it. In the USA, for instance, top educational institutes are ranked according to research they conducted in the field of technology as a primitive parameter. If they do not follow this trend, they might lose the race in new developments. As a result, they entice people to become a part of this community.
In my opinion, the trend setup by the institutions is climbing up nowadays wherein subjects like literature and drama are becoming unpopular among youngsters. Obviously, students from these fields are unable to receive employment even if they are experienced. For example, In India, in recent years unemployment significantly rose in the sectors deals in Art. People are shifting their focus from these sectors to science because it can help them achieve their dreams faster and can give financial stability early in life. The increase, therefore, in the migration has risen sharply to show its importance for us.
In conclusion, science is a wonderful gift that we wrapped for ourselves and shows the importance of why many institutions are making awareness of it. I believe, in a longer period, it is essential to open a wide range of realms in science so that individuals can get employment and return back benefits to society and their centers.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...enced. For example, In India, in recent years unemployment significantly rose in the ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...its importance for us. In conclusion, science is a wonderful gift that we wrap...
^^
Line 7, column 285, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...that individuals can get employment and return back benefits to society and their centers. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... benefits to society and their centers.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20563380282 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01476101398 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585915492958 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.896239919 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245923915544 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679875026792 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520471472819 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130875776039 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261898187732 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...enced. For example, In India, in recent years unemployment significantly rose in the ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...its importance for us. In conclusion, science is a wonderful gift that we wrap...
^^
Line 7, column 285, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...that individuals can get employment and return back benefits to society and their centers. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... benefits to society and their centers.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20563380282 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01476101398 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585915492958 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.896239919 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245923915544 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679875026792 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520471472819 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130875776039 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261898187732 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.