Some people say young people should be completely free to choose their future job but others think young people must be more realistic in their choice.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The nature of jobs, these days, has drastically changed due to several reasons. Although some believe that the young generation should aim for jobs based on their own will, others agree their interest ought to be shaped based on the job market. This essay will discuss both views, however, I personally feel that every individual must given the right to opt for a profession based on one’s likings.
To begin with, It is utterly essential for a person to make a selection based on interest, which they create over a period of time. Indeed, some researchers concluded in their term papers that if young people indulge in a work where they are showing more interest and feeling passionate, they are more likely to achieve early success in their professional ladder. Justin Bieber, for example, started to play the musical instruments when he was in his early childhood and continued his devotion towards music. So, I believe such a way of allowing children to make choices could be better in the long-term.
Clearly, some parents teach their young ones to focus profoundly on skills, which are especially booming in the current situation that could be a boon for them to land a job. Most students, who are attending engineering colleges, are being told about the high salary packages when they start. For example, In India, a myriad number of institutions are offering engineering qualification diplomas, but students enrolled in such places are not having enough skills to obtain a job. Eventually, they are unable to get employment in existing job market.
In conclusion, It is a substantive decision about the future job that adolescents have the full right to choose from because they will seamlessly live with it. Sometimes being practical in the job market does not fetch fruitful results and over a period of time people find them unhappy and dispassionate in their jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 336, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have given' or 'give'?
Suggestion: have given; give
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...d on interest, which they create over a period of time. Indeed, some researchers concluded in ...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'Sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'being'.
Suggestion: Being Sometimes
...ause they will seamlessly live with it. Sometimes being practical in the job market does not fe...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...s not fetch fruitful results and over a period of time people find them unhappy and dispassion...
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Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nhappy and dispassionate in their jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0127388535 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64683212788 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62101910828 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2761874749 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272747085625 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814698291623 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083000655207 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157761763004 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286306002767 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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