Many people choose natural healing methods,such as acupuncture and massage therapy to recover from illness.othera prefer to use pharmaceutical drugs prescribed by thier doctor for their aliments.what is your opinion
many people stuck between the methods whether to opt for natural healing ways or using pharmacy products.In my opinion, both the aspects have their own essentiality.Upcoming paragraphs will outline the reasons of my opinion.
While talking about the natural healing process,we can say that a natural way of healing is far better than healing by chemicals used in medicines. Individuals should try to avoid the use of medications when there is a small injury. For instance, a week ago, I was suffering from severe headache bt I had gone wich a cup of ginger tea in spite of taking a painkiller to overcome this problem. there are enormous natural methods to heal . it is more significant to choose them instead of pharmaceuticals.
On the other hand, medications have their own essential role for treatment of an ailment. Unlike the natural methods,these are more effective and less time-consuming in the treatment. there are many cases where there is no any other option other than injections and pills to save one's life. In that case,natural methods fail to give instant treatment.for example,the person suffering from asthma need an instant medication through inhalers otherwise they will not able to breathe and can die.
By concluding, both the methods are efficient at their own place.it is depend on the type of problem by which the patient is suffering. And definitely on the health of patient that which way is more effective at that time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, for instance, talking about, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0625 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03231790509 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5284975566 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217202349815 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745620425061 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628798212627 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125262591304 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648449539357 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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