Dear Sir or Madam
I would like to apply as a tour guide which I've read about in local published newspaper.
I am a junior student and studying in psychology major in Azad University. Now I am in summer holidays and I want to earn in order to pay University tuition.
I 've been living here since I was born. Thus, I know and have enough information about all hotels, males, historical and sightseeing places in the city. Besides, I 've always been enthusiastic to explain patiently something to others and given lots of presentation during my education with high score. In addition, I can introduce myself as a social, good-tempered and smooth-spoken. I read lots of historical and guide books that can help me to requested career. I come from Iran originally and can speak Persian as well as English and French.
I have some relevant experience. when I was in high school, I was assigned to manage my classmates in camps. my teachers always appreciated and admired me to do the best.
I believe I am a good candidate for the post and hope so much you will consider me.
I am looking forward to hearing you.
Sincerely,
Atrisa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I've
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
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...Persian as well as English and French. I have some relevant experience. when I w...
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Suggestion: My
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look, so, thus, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89049160341 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646766169154 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6514250157 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3571428571 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110336994828 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031544677602 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322751264005 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601040855529 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337716111163 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.