Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Sport is a requirement for our both physical and mental health. Human body is in a continuous development and changes during the whole life, that's why we have to be engaged in a numerous physical activities. For a student life, which includes a lot of studies and researches in front of a book or computer, doing sport is a must, in order to maintain a balance between active and inactive life style. Thus, I agree with the following statement. I feel this way for sveral reasons which I will expound in the following essay.
To begin with, practicing sports and social activities strengthen our body, becoming more immune at different viruses or diseases. Moreover, being in shape confers a state of confidence, that most students finds hard to acquire during their teenage. Drawing from my own experience, when I used to go to the gym I felt proud of myself and obtained a dose of confidence. I really use to catch a cold in the colder seasons, and due to practice of sport I definitely managed to improve my immune system.
Secondly, taking part of a team brings new strong connections in student's life, despite their gender, religion, background knowledge. Having same interests as others helps the student to integrate better in society. Additionally, students are able to develop some qualities which are necessary for future career such as time management capability, responsibility, attention. For instance, when I played basketball in high school, I and my team were so emotionally implicated in the game, so we succeeded in creating a strong relationship, furthermore we became much stronger and capable to control any movement.
To conclude, a healthy body is free from diseases and anxiety, as a result it can lead to a happy life. In order to maintain the health a lot of sport is required and obviously universities have to pay attention to it as much as to libraries and classes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uman body is in a continuous development and changes during the whole life, thats...
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Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ent and changes during the whole life, thats why we have to be engaged in a numerous...
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Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'activity'?
Suggestion: activity
...ve to be engaged in a numerous physical activities. For a student life, which includes a l...
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...obtained a dose of confidence. I really use to catch a cold in the colder seasons, ...
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Line 5, column 516, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in the game, so we succeeded in creating a strong relationship, furthermore we be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, as to, for instance, i feel, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91304347826 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93566157267 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614906832298 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9047202499 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.466666667 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11893735453 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455653623638 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722534355047 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679830224966 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437538308622 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.