Building bridges able to connect different cultures is not an easy task. A wide range of ideas have been proposed. from traveling to cultural exchanges. Ultimately many believe that a good way to make acquaintance with foreign cultures is to work for a multinational organization. To some extent this a reasonable proposal and in this essay I will examine the pros and cons of this statement.
Multinational companies are economic giants with overseas branches scattered all over the world. Most of them produce the most desperate items, from appliances to engines. Other have interests in numerous fields, like healthcare, energy, electricity, and insurance. The common factor linking those companies is the fact that their employees come from distant countries and this mix of culture is actually an extremely fertile ground to seed tolerance, respect, and mutual understanding. Variety is a strong point that has the potential to make companies more competitive and proficient, since it brings different ways to see the world and different approach to sole problems.
Consequently, chances are that working for a multinational company can increase the dialogue among nations. People coming from far points of the planet are gathered to accomplish goals together, to share knowledge, and to learn from each other with no distinction of cultural background, language, and religion. Furthermore, it is also a magnificent opportunity to meet travel to countries that otherwise no one would visit. Conversely to what many think, multinational companies take a major role in developing war-torn economies, in creating jobs, and in bolstering technical improvement.
To conclude, I firmly believe that working for a multinational organization can represent an excellent way to broaden their own interests, to learn new languages, and to grow.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, consequently, conversely, furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50704225352 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14477427442 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630281690141 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2277707921 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.266666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208875150897 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615850504279 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605956994567 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129713343671 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436922407425 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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