These days, many people or not I will be happier thank past because of many reasons. Nowadays, people avoid to go out and meet their friends and relatives because they can do this thing throughout Internet.This essay will give the solution.
To begin with, there are many reasons for individuals loneliness and unhealthiness. Mainly, people’s work, because of the hectic and busy work schedule, they cannot get time for family and friends. Because of their tough schedule people avoid healthy food of home and have to consume junk food. For this, government should include strict laws for working hours for people so they can get time for the loved ones. Moreover, in past people do their work by their self such as housework, farming work etc. In present people depend for all kinds of work on others. People should do some work by their self.
Further more, in this technological era, technology make the individual’s work easy and quick. In the past, people went out to meet friends and relatives regularly, for all their recreational activity and to greet their loved ones. But in present through internet and mobile it is easy to communicate to others and this technology provides all kind of recreational activities such as video calling, playing games, watching movies etc. Although, people avoid to go out. For this situation, group of people should arrange any get together in place like gardens, park etc. For this government should also implement and introduce some more places for recreational activities like yoga park, meditation centre which are connected people to the nature and also laughter club etc.For this, people can involve their self in such activities and chance to meet new people too.
To put it in a nut shell, I pen down saying that, if people can pay more attention in other activities and spend more time with their near and loved ones, it should be beneficial for them and they can explore the life apart from their work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid going', 'avoid gonna'.
Suggestion: avoid going; avoid gonna
...cause of many reasons. Nowadays, people avoid to go out and meet their friends and relative...
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Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...y can do this thing throughout Internet.This essay will give the solution. To beg...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ness and unhealthiness. Mainly, people’s work, because of the hectic and busy wor...
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Line 5, column 453, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid going', 'avoid gonna'.
Suggestion: avoid going; avoid gonna
..., watching movies etc. Although, people avoid to go out. For this situation, group of peopl...
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Line 5, column 590, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e gardens, park etc. For this government should also implement and introduce some...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...o the nature and also laughter club etc.For this, people can involve their self in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, apart from, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94561933535 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5063550446 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540785498489 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.3206994699 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.3125 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185889090053 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755219064071 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392048803706 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135163471765 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212289458309 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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