Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting.
In your letter, you should:
give some details about the job
mention how you came across the job opportunity
explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend
Dear John,
I hope you're doing well and how's the young Sarah? Well, I'm writing to share one job opening with you that I think you might be interested in applying.
With regard to the job, there is a vacancy for the position of a software engineer in Microsoft, where I work. It's a full-time job and the organization is looking for candidates with a minimum of 5 years of working experience in any programming language.
As for the vacancy, it was yesterday that my manager told me that there are few job openings and asked me for any reference. Your name strike first to my mind and I thought of sharing this news with you. You'd definitely be a strong candidate to fill this position.
I think that this would be a wonderful opportunity for you to switch job, as you mentioned during summer vacation that you want to return to your original IT career from the sales job. Moreover, the job location would be the same as your current location so Sarah's school won't be impacted by the job change. Maybe you should consider all the positive aspects of this role and decide.
Let me know if you find it suitable for you and I'll refer you for this position. Also, say my hi to both Amy and Sarah.
Best wishes,
Ell
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear John, I hope youre doing well and hows the young Sarah? We...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: how's
...ar John, I hope youre doing well and hows the young Sarah? Well, Im writing to sh...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ng well and hows the young Sarah? Well, Im writing to share one job opening with y...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...re engineer in Microsoft, where I work. Its a full-time job and the organization is...
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Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You'd
... thought of sharing this news with you. Youd definitely be a strong candidate to fil...
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Line 11, column 49, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...now if you find it suitable for you and Ill refer you for this position. Also, say ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, as for, i think, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48660714286 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43142148286 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3338491852 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3076923077 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375742054974 0.216113520407 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12359857859 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115539751719 0.0603063233224 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213576933508 0.12726935374 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114770716334 0.0580467560999 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.