Some people think that these days people have overwhelming number of alternatives. I completely agree with this statement that people nowadays have large number of choices, which is caused by the technology advancement.
Firstly, technology advancement has ease a lot of vendors to sell their products and services, which make people have so many choices in choosing a product or service. The number of people which offer the same products and services are growing, and technology makes it possible to accommodate them. As a result, there are overwhelming number of options for each product or service category. For instance, there is a lot of food delivery applications which make people have so many choices just for ordering food. This makes people sometimes feel confused to choose because of these immense number of options.
Secondly, because of this rapid development of technology, the competition among product and services provider becomes so intense. All of those vendors and providers are competing to give the best service they can to the customers. As a result, the customers will have so many choices which can lead to them become lazy. The effort in getting something is now replaced with the newest features which product and service providers offer. For the example, previously people will go to the work using bicycle or bus which require more efforts. But ever since the advancement of many online taxi and motorcycle applications, people now choose to order them, because they are easier to get and have multiple features which are not available in classic transportation like bicycle or bus. As a result, people nowadays become effortless even in doing simple activity like going to work place.
In conclusion, I completely agree that people these days have enormous choices, which is mainly caused by rapid development of technology, because technology advancement has ease a lot of vendors to sell their products and services and has intense the competition among the product and service providers.
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. 84
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 67
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together Do you agree or disagree 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25846153846 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77290354734 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470769230769 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6284794 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.933333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138707263904 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588037970541 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409426675986 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987178026549 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351653657368 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.