You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features You should write at least 150 words

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

You should write at least 150 words

Submitted by Modi on Thu, 10/01/2020 - 05:30

The flow chart illustrated below given many consequence of deforestation which has bad effect on enviornment.The deforestation is largely caused due to cutting of forest.The cutting of forest requires heavy logging equipment whihc compresses soil to become hard and baked.During rainfall,water is least absorbed by soil and runs off on it, which end up with flood scenario.

The cutting of forest can cause holding of fewer roots which erodes top soil.The delibrating or accidental increase in burning activites may profiligate wood.The useful micro-organism feeding on waste may get fatal.The moisture released from plant to air gets reduced and this lead to drought conditionto evolved.The three cause of soil getting eroded,micro-organism ended up there life and increase in drought condition will leads to sabotage of vegetation.Te deforestion effects in end reduce the biodiversity.

The consequence deforestation has left its harmful effect to the enviornment.Every information illustrated from flow chart,concludes vindicate the vigorous damage to enviornment.The mankind must take considerable steps to cure motherland.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun consequence seems to be countable; consider using: 'many consequences'.
Suggestion: many consequences
The flow chart illustrated below given many consequence of deforestation which has bad effect o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ion which has bad effect on enviornment.The deforestation is largely caused due to ...
^^^
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...largely caused due to cutting of forest.The cutting of forest requires heavy loggin...
^^^
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...largely caused due to cutting of forest.The cutting of forest requires heavy loggin...
^^^
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: During
...ompresses soil to become hard and baked.During rainfall,water is least absorbed by soi...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , water
...to become hard and baked.During rainfall,water is least absorbed by soil and runs off ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ng of fewer roots which erodes top soil.The delibrating or accidental increase in b...
^^^
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... burning activites may profiligate wood.The useful micro-organism feeding on waste ...
^^^
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... burning activites may profiligate wood.The useful micro-organism feeding on waste ...
^^^
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...organism feeding on waste may get fatal.The moisture released from plant to air get...
^^^
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...organism feeding on waste may get fatal.The moisture released from plant to air get...
^^^
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...his lead to drought conditionto evolved.The three cause of soil getting eroded,micr...
^^^
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...his lead to drought conditionto evolved.The three cause of soil getting eroded,micr...
^^^
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , micro-organism
...d.The three cause of soil getting eroded,micro-organism ended up there life and increase in dro...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
... and increase in drought condition will leads to sabotage of vegetation.Te deforestio...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Te
...on will leads to sabotage of vegetation.Te deforestion effects in end reduce the b...
^^
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Every
...t its harmful effect to the enviornment.Every information illustrated from flow chart...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , concludes
... information illustrated from flow chart,concludes vindicate the vigorous damage to envior...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...cate the vigorous damage to enviornment.The mankind must take considerable steps to...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02469135802 4.92477711251 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.70485578789 2.65546596893 140% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703703703704 0.547539520022 129% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 22.4926829268 240% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.864004736 43.030603864 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 325.333333333 112.824112599 288% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.0 22.9334400587 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0917914648461 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758743304197 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417058897019 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758743304197 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417058897019 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.9 13.2329268293 256% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.25 61.2550243902 -0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.51609756098 279% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 10.3012195122 259% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.52 11.4140731707 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.29 8.06136585366 140% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.4329268293 267% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.9970731707 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun consequence seems to be countable; consider using: 'many consequences'.
Suggestion: many consequences
The flow chart illustrated below given many consequence of deforestation which has bad effect o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ion which has bad effect on enviornment.The deforestation is largely caused due to ...
^^^
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...largely caused due to cutting of forest.The cutting of forest requires heavy loggin...
^^^
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...largely caused due to cutting of forest.The cutting of forest requires heavy loggin...
^^^
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: During
...ompresses soil to become hard and baked.During rainfall,water is least absorbed by soi...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , water
...to become hard and baked.During rainfall,water is least absorbed by soil and runs off ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ng of fewer roots which erodes top soil.The delibrating or accidental increase in b...
^^^
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... burning activites may profiligate wood.The useful micro-organism feeding on waste ...
^^^
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... burning activites may profiligate wood.The useful micro-organism feeding on waste ...
^^^
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...organism feeding on waste may get fatal.The moisture released from plant to air get...
^^^
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...organism feeding on waste may get fatal.The moisture released from plant to air get...
^^^
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...his lead to drought conditionto evolved.The three cause of soil getting eroded,micr...
^^^
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...his lead to drought conditionto evolved.The three cause of soil getting eroded,micr...
^^^
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , micro-organism
...d.The three cause of soil getting eroded,micro-organism ended up there life and increase in dro...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
... and increase in drought condition will leads to sabotage of vegetation.Te deforestio...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Te
...on will leads to sabotage of vegetation.Te deforestion effects in end reduce the b...
^^
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Every
...t its harmful effect to the enviornment.Every information illustrated from flow chart...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , concludes
... information illustrated from flow chart,concludes vindicate the vigorous damage to envior...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...cate the vigorous damage to enviornment.The mankind must take considerable steps to...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02469135802 4.92477711251 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.70485578789 2.65546596893 140% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703703703704 0.547539520022 129% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 22.4926829268 240% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.864004736 43.030603864 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 325.333333333 112.824112599 288% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.0 22.9334400587 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0917914648461 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758743304197 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417058897019 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758743304197 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417058897019 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.9 13.2329268293 256% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.25 61.2550243902 -0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.51609756098 279% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 10.3012195122 259% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.52 11.4140731707 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.29 8.06136585366 140% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.4329268293 267% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.9970731707 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.