By enormous population increase and technological advancement, our planet has being destroyed gradually, and if the fundamental remedies do not employed for saving it, it will be uninhabitable for all creatures in the future. Of course, there are many environmental problems that we can deal with them, but some paramount issues should be prioritized.
First of all, some people may believe that preserving rare plants and animals is compulsory. They point out that by abolishing them from the food chain of creatures, the remained wildlife may be in danger of extinction too. Then, they suggest that keeping them in captivity and having breeding programs, can be ameliorate the problem to some extent. As it can be seen now in theme parks, zoos or protected zones where rare plants and animals are kept and environmentalism try to help to protect them as well as possible.
On the other hand, there are other environmental problems needing to be solved and considered.The first one is the issue of air pollution and the impacts that it has on the ecosystem. After civilization, the number of factories have increased enormously, and they have posed the problem of air pollution by releasing pollutants. This means that the greenhouse gases have increased, causing ozone layer depletion leading to global warming and then drought and famine. Furthermore, industrial estates are built in the countrysides that their sewages pour into the rivers and seas, causing water pollution. Then, the marine creatures all face with the harmful food chain, causing death and human beings also are in the threat of death as well. For example, in some industrial cities beside the sea, it has been observed that the overwhelming majority of fish used for canned fish have died because of some pollutants entered by industrial sewages.
To sum up, having the fear of extinction of particular species is a simplistic view because there are other paramount problems like air and water pollution that should be prioritized. The problem of pollution can destroy life of all creatures on the earth that is an unbelievable global disaster.
- In some countries owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think it is a positive or negative situation 73
- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
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- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message 73
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, well, for example, of course, as well as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17101449275 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90083967593 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56231884058 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9234588808 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.428571429 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6428571429 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157925287157 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590799930691 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524969832343 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103677510507 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220266205997 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.