The figures provide information regarding the current and future plans of a sports centre of a university.
As regards the first, the centre will experience noticeable changes after the restoration. By comparing two maps, it is obvious that the reception, pool, changing room and also seating area will remain untouched. However, the gym will be extended from the east part of it, and outdoor courts will be moved entirely. Furthermore, in the entrance part, there will be a café and changing room in the east part of the corridor, and a sports shop with another changing room in the west part of the entry corridor. It is worth noting that leisure pool will be added west of the central pool just beside the changing room. Also, other facilities like two dance studios with a sports hall will be east of the 25m pool, meaning former will be beside the seating part of the pool and latter will be constructed across the sports hall.
To conclude, there will be significant changes after the redevelopment of the sports centre, and majority of facilities will be added for students use.
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- In some countries owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think it is a positive or negative situation 73
- The plans below show the layout of a university s sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 670, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...acilities like two dance studios with a sports hall will be east of the 25m pool, mean...
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Line 3, column 813, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...d latter will be constructed across the sports hall. To conclude, there will be si...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, as regards
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85561497326 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5559819156 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51871657754 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7430757731 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183009076961 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101012165185 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556584503849 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154948804198 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214552741507 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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