In today’s highly pressurized lifestyle, people have to tolerate the burden of long hours work in order to cover their daily expenses to some extent. Finding a compromise between work and less stressful life hours leads people to think about having their own businesses instead of working for others.
First of all, thanks to modern technology, communication tools are increasing, ranging from smart-phones and teleconferencing equipments to laptops leading all employees being contactable all times of the day. Therefore, employers expect them to work for longer hours, leading no private life for staff and increasing pressure on them. The second point is that economic turmoil poses a competitive environment on people specially in service sector to compete for promotions to prevent from facing with any probable redundancy. Then, all pointed issues add up to workers anxiety and also have impact on their daily routines, then they try to create their own business to ameliorate their highly-pressurized working conditions.
Turning to possible drawbacks, we can point out the risk money loss in investment on new businesses because if they are not programmed accurately, they will cause financial problems and then even bankruptcy, leading irrecoverable consequences. This means that there are highly competitive organizations and companies in labour markets which are managing by specialist and compete with other rivals in order to prevent from any potential failure. Therefore, in order to have prosperous business, managers should be aware of all aspects of their new established work. As a second risk, it is worth noting that if a manager does not have skills such as patience, justice, discipline and also team work spirit, starting a new business can not prospect because beside investment, having proper management methods is compulsory to deal with any problems.
To conclude, today’s economic recession can be the main reason of leaving a work and starting new business, and money loss with weak business can be the disadvantages of starting a new business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sadvantages of starting a new business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4475308642 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00618393032 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595679012346 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.8853005212 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.454545455 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4545454545 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153142311221 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610122337577 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467653007106 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101314871843 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364443209932 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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