Technological advancement makes everything easy for human beings and brings convenience to them. It can be enjoyable for everybody to press a button and then read his/her favorite book or newspaper, but abolishing printed books or newspapers is impossible, and I will explain why.
First of all, worries about health are increasing among people noticeably, and the media play paramount role in warning them. It means that gazing long hours at the screen of electronic gadgets such as smartphones or tablets can cause irrecoverable harm to the eyes, causing eye strain in the long-term. The second point is that the economic recession has an enormous impact on people’s living conditions, leading deprived people to become poorer, followed by civil wars. Therefore, finding a way to prevent starvation is prioritized by them rather than having an electronic gadget to read newspapers or even books. There are a huge number of humans suffering from drought, famine, and war, then we can not expect them to replace their few available books with electronic books.
I do appreciate people who believe that reading ebooks or online newspapers can help to save their invaluable time considerably, and decrease their daily living expenses to some extent. They point out that instead of traveling long distances and paying transportation fares or fuel costs to purchase their favorite books or newspapers, they can browse the internet and buy them conveniently. However, it seems to me that it is a simplistic viewpoint to avoid considering all society.
To conclude, technology growth can help people to provide their books and newspapers online, but to say that all printed books and newspapers will be abolished is an optimistic view because of the problems and challenges that are going to worsen people’s life as a whole.
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- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2380952381 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88635856394 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.059080591 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200610059021 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660805523331 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653546403189 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131444237529 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564329974015 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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