The figure provides information regarding the number of visitors who traveled to an island over a period of 8 years.
First of all, the figures of visitors on cruise ships and on island had fluctuations between the year 2010 and 2017, but the trend was upward for them. It is obvious that the number of cruise ships’ travelers was lower than island visitors during the first 5.5 years (from 2010 to the middle of 2015), starting from 0.25 million and taking over in 1.25 million, then reaching to 2 million in the year end. Furthermore, constant number of passengers was experienced during the first year (2010-2011), staying in a level of 0.75 million. Then the number of island travelers rose steadily from year 2011 to 2013, leveling off at 1.5 million over a 2-year period (from 2013 tp 2015), and after a downward trend came back to the same mark in 1.5 million. Finally, the overall number of visitors increased constantly from 1 million in 2010 to 3.5 million in the year 2017.
To conclude, the number of visitors to a Caribbean island had an upward pattern in the related years, although it had some fluctuations during years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... 2 million in the year end. Furthermore, constant number of passengers was experi...
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Suggestion:
...011 to 2013, leveling off at 1.5 million over a 2-year period from 2013 tp 2015, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, regarding, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75757575758 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49343592907 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.4730095317 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.571428571 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 5.23603664747 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122811792541 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758516996973 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256689129425 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904444558255 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0103288317468 0.0819641961636 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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