A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 435, Rule ID: FOR_FRO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
... different expertise that are necessary fro a national development. Education is t...
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Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...al aspect of any national developments. it is no doubt that for a ntion to develop...
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Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...s discipline can not be overemphasised. it is on this note that I quite disagree w...
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Line 2, column 249, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...e disagree with the recommendation that the a nation should require all of its studen...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...curriculum untill they enter college. it is a well known fact that interest and ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...curriculum untill they enter college. it is a well known fact that interest and ...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...iting their interest to specific areas. this is not in any way advantageous to any n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 256.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3046875 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11608102229 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53515625 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9274325661 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.888888889 118.986275619 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425645230675 0.243740707755 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189688338596 0.0831039109588 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189813772134 0.0758088955206 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273637110835 0.150359130593 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122928876776 0.0667264976115 184% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 14.1392134831 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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