Studies have suggested that children watch much more television than they
did in the past and spend less time on active or creative things.
What are the reasons and what measures should be taken to encourage
children to spend more time on active or creative things?
Child development is irrefutably one of the most important measures of
every nation's prosperity. however, an unfortunate development as o late
has been that their creativity and physical development have been
degenerate, manifesting itself in a fall in the amount of time spend on
active and creative things, compare to considerable time for watching
television. This trend can be attributed to a host of factors and some
radical solutions should be taken to tackle the problems it may bring.
There are two main factors leading to the current trend. First, the lack of
parental care is to blame. Today, parents are up to their ear in work and
hectic schedules. Therefore, they could not spend enough time with their
child and allow their children to use smartphones freely to entertain
themself. Second, the overloaded curriculum also precludes children
from going in for physical activity. For example, in most high school in
Vietnam, students are required to finish a huge amount of assignments
before the next lecture every day, which leave them a little amount of
time to engage in other activity like extra curriculum activity.
In order to address those problems, several actions can be taken. The
first solution is that parents should spend more time interacting with
their child, and limit the amount o time that a child can watch television.
This could be done by activating the parental control mode and fixed
operating time limit on their television set. Another solution is that
schools should include subjects like Art or Physical Education as a core
subject. Thereby, children could involve more in creative things and
outdoor exercise.
In conclusion, lack of parental care and heavy school workload have
made it difficult for many children to lead a healthy life. Therefore, the
proposed solutions should be applied to remedy this situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...f the most important measures of every nations prosperity. however, an unfortunate dev...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... measures of every nations prosperity. however, an unfortunate development as o late ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33112582781 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69877909849 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579470198675 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8706363939 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.38176352705 593% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284028524108 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079552250524 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717847261054 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708851867874 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677878955381 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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