Agree or disagree: leisure time
Having a fruitful and relaxing leisure time plays a crucial role in experiencing a healthy lifestyle. People have different approaches toward it, based on their personalities. I prefer to spend my spare time with a large group of people for the reasons that I am going to explain in the following passage.
For the first thing, the main points of having a leisure time is being distracted from daily life stressors, getting relaxed, and having fun. When I am alone, I cannot help myself with overthinking about the problems I have been dealing with in the current day and/or week. Unfortunately, being in company with only one or two friends, who are usually my closest ones, leads me to ruminate on the bad experiences I have had along the week, in order to have their opinions on it. Therefore, I gradually become seriously obsessed with negative thoughts, and my mood plunges dramatically. So, I need to be around a large group of people to drag me out of the spiral of low mood and negative attitude.
Second, leisure time is the best time for having secure social interactions out of professional settings. We are always learning life skills through diverse social contacts by being exposed to new people and new situations, that excite our minds and push them to new edges. In the modern era, when the social contacts have the primary and critical influence on our economic success, the best way to become an expert in handling the professional conflicts is having prior practices. Leisure times are secure experiences that keep us fit for dealing with serious social situations. Thus, having more people around while spending leisure time is equal to more contacts and higher levels of social preparation.
Finally, spending fun time among a big group of people usually mandates to get out of home and get involved with the world behind the door. It is of utmost importance to sometimes astray from daily routines, especially for me. So, I prefer to meet my friends in outdoor settings, because staying at home makes me depressed.
In conclusion, having a lot of companions in leisure times has many advantages. It helps me to be distracted from whatever makes me anxious, and elevates my mood. It enhances my social skills, and pushes me out of my cozy apartment to get in touch with the outside world. Therefore, I believe that spending leisure time with a lot of people is much preferable than being alone, or with a small group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85680190931 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69068920273 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520286396181 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4192256919 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.95 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162034832834 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682572546143 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851303039006 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105952426047 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513583761656 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.