Immigration has a major impact on the society.
What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?
Write at least 250 words.
In our modern world, immigration became one of the most popular movements, regardless its huge influences on the society. This essay will discuss the major causes of this movement which are wars and poverty, and produces the possible results.
The foremost reasons are wars and poverty. As a result of the conflicts between countries, people prefer leaving and going to a new place in order to get a better life. Further, immigrants take the courage to travel to unknown places for seeking safety to their children's life. For example, the recent study submitted by the University of US, it revealed that 43% of immigrants were living in a country full of warfare. The second reason is poverty. Poverty, with no doubt, is a worldwide phenomenon. Therefore, most humans who took the action of leaving their own kingdom were motivated to leave due to destitution. For this reason, inhabitants search for a new place where they can get a chance of living stable life. Recently, studies have proven that poverty urges people to immigrate.
The possible consequences are the rise of the percentage of population in some country and the disappointment that reality does not not match their expectations. The unbalance of the number of residents became a real issue in the world. By moving to other lands, the population in the old country will decrease whereas in the country of immigration will increase. The second result might be that people's dreams of having a life free of suffering does not come true. Most of those who left to improve their living become upset eventually. For example, the scarcity of jobs alongside taxes increases will make their suffering continue.
In conclusion, wars and poverty are the reasons why people tend to leave their homes, regardless its influence on the society. However, they won't find the reality that match their predictions in most situations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: not
...nd the disappointment that reality does not not match their expectations. The unbalance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0608974359 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69308406083 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.100308282 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1052631579 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0880012276789 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.02749984698 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282853354089 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0509458910107 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225461110755 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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