Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause both social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is often thought that migrating to a new country where one naturally has to communicate in another tongue cannot only be practically difficult but also socially too. In my opinion, I strongly agree because this constitutes a huge problem with effective communication, mobility as well as securing a job.
To begin with, the inability to speak in the native language will invariably lead to failure to fully express one's personality and form a social bonds with others. One obvious reason for this is that it results in isolation and prevents the free flow of accurate information because the parties involved will not understand each other. For instance, it may hinder shopping or buying of goods and services at ridiculous prices due to lack of negotiation from the language barrier. What is more, it may be difficult for people who speak a different tongue to learn from each other, which can foment discrimination and separation of groups.
Moreover, not knowing the language of your country of residence can hinder movement from one place to the other. This is simply because understanding the road signs, asking for direction or the use of digital maps requires at least some basic knowledge of the lingo. Another pragmatic problem is the increased unemployment rates among newly arrived immigrants who cannot speak the language of their country of residence. An employer will prefer to hire someone who has mastered the dialect to a certain level and not a beginner to avoid jeopardy that can arise while conveying information at the workplace.
In conclusion, although mobility, barrier in communicating and lack of jobs are the major problems arising from failure to speak the language of the country where one resides. Efforts should be made by potential migrants to acquire at least the basic language skills of their new or prospective countries from their native countries before moving to a new country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, as to, at least, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13015873016 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79834742291 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 20.490343254 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189602260556 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705350103673 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505743791819 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121410459291 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309139639929 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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