The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The bar chart compares the percentage of families in possed and rented accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011
Overall, during the first half of the period, households’ preferences for rented accommodation were higher than the preferences of owned accommodation, while the opposite trend was observed for over the final 30 years.
In 1981, ownership accounted for just nearly 25% compared to rentals, which were over 75%. From that point, there was a stable decline in rental and a rise in ownership. The rental was 69% in 1939 and hold the proportion in 1953 before falling to 1961 and being even with ownership’s proportion in 1971. Ownership had a steady rise in 1939 and 1953 at over 30% and had a difference in growth is 10% from 1961 [40%] to 1971 [50%].
From 1981 to 2011, ownership continued its rising trend to reach a peak of nearly 70% before dropping in 2011 by 5%. The proportion of tenant had an opposite pattern, falling in 1981 at 40% and dropping nearly by 10% in 1991 and 2001, followed by a small rise of 5% in 2011.
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- the plans below show the layout of a university s sports center now and how it will look after redevelopment 56
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 78
- the plans below show the layout of a university s sports center now and how it will look after redevelopment 78
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 275, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...followed by a small rise of 5% in 2011.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66844919786 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69461414841 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55614973262 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.5478599245 43.030603864 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.714285714 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169584287199 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641844218181 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116370037688 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156946055376 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172658230444 0.0819641961636 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.