A Number of different medical traditions are now widely known and used :western medicine , herbal medicine ,accupunture , homeopathy and so on
How important is patient's mental attitude towards his/her treatment in determining the effectiveness of tge treatment
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience
It is popularly said that ' A mind can win world' . Our mind has next level of significance in performing every task of our daily routine. Their are uncountable types of medicines and doctors , but these are of no purpose if patient is not mentally satisfied with them . vast advancement in medical science has confused the people regarding choosing between types of medicine . treating relations of a doctor plays a vital role in curing of a patient
Every disease can be cured in a tweak if one is having positive approach to fight with it . It is fundamental duty of every doctor to maintain good relations with their patient , consequently the patient will able to describe about his problem and disease by feeling at home . placebo given by a doctor will act as a boost vaccine in working of prescribed medicine . These placebo not only award pshychological benifits but also increase efficiency and effectiveness of treatment .
There are uncountable examples when a local family doctor is able to cure a major disease , the reason behind it is , that the patient have trust and a true believe on theie family doctor . Moreover , a doctor is said to be a second god , so in respect to it , building of confidence and motivation in their patient plays a keen role . but contrastly, many doctors are making this profession as a business . In addition to this , they are degrading the morale of a patient which leads to worsening of the disease . The main purpose behind this was to adopt diseased person for expensive cures . A perfect health care employee should respect his or her patient's opinion and give them details of procedure and alternative strategies to cure
Finally , reliability is an essential factor for receiving better health care facilities . One should develop a friendly relations with their healthcare employees , so that they can grab the root cause of disease and act accordingly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, finally, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94637223975 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82217492021 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558359621451 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5623513028 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.533333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116330771516 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394411254152 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349246492929 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686709171576 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341294798696 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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