Many people argue that eating junk food has led to an unhealthy lifestyle. This problem has become more common among young people these days. Do you agree or disagree that junk food is the cause of the issue?
Lots of studies nowadays shows that young people face an unhealthy lifestyle due to the excessive eating of junk food. Street food has been one of the best top seller appetites worldwide when teenagers thirst for it. Many populations declare that junk food leads to a harmful lifestyle while others disagree about it.
People and especially old generation agree to the fact that fast food harms our health especially our immune system and unhealthy food weakness one’s immune system which lead him to face many diseases. Next, consuming numerous junk food can change in the body of a person and transform it into a huge fat belly. For example, Times article once published a story about a young boy who ate junk food every day and become the world’s youngest obese boy, but this caused him to face many health problems that led to death at a young age (14 years) in the year 2008.
On the other hand, many humans say that junk food gives happiness to the soul, stomach and disagrees that it leads to an unhealthy lifestyle. To begin, all kids conquer that going to MC Donald’s or any other street food gives them pleasure and leisure all day. Moreover, who said that going out to eat some street food may harm the health of a person. For example, food bloggers influence many people by their food posts on social media, where their followers are encouraged to grub that food.
In conclusion, there is always two sides to every argument. When junk food is consumed very often it leads to many health problems, and especially to a harmful obesity that may sometimes cause death. But, have balance in the way of eating fast food could keep you on the right healthy track.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70847457627 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.267008553 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586440677966 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4888811753 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410721562445 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141415486006 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847041164422 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25281138462 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552859655756 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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