Some educators believe that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Knowing any art in today’s time helps to balance a stressful life. Some education professionals believe that a child should learn playing a musical instrument in their school. This essay will discuss why learning any musical instrument should be one’s own choice despite some benefits.
To begin with, it is true that music helps to relax one's mind and reduces stress. A person with this skill can disengage from the chaotic world and can rejuvenate themselves to come back and become more effective in their mundane life. For instance, Many CEOs after fortune 500 organizations have talked about how music plays an important role in achieving their overall goals. Therefore, learning this skill can be really beneficial for a child in their adult life.
On the other hand, however, learning a new skill should only be One’s own decision. Every child is made different and if one tries to force anything on them it may create adverse effects on the crowd. Moreover, not every child wants to pursue the same hobby as they may be good at some other art or sport. They may not only be bad at it but may also miss out on the opportunity in their area of interest. For instance, an athlete who is an excellent football player may not find any interest in music but when forced to learn, can affect one’s performance in their sport. For these reasons, learning a musical instrument should be at once on discretion.
In conclusion, many teachers promote the idea of teaching a musical instrument to every child. In my view, however, this has to be their own decision, and rather than pushing children to learn an instrument they should be encouraged to pursue their passion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to play'.
Suggestion: to play
...onals believe that a child should learn playing a musical instrument in their school. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in my view, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83680555556 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53208338666 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565972222222 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4474775456 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251285202606 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101798035788 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940143867777 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176138117425 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072007956011 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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