In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In a few countries, many people are suffering from health related issues by overconsumption of junk food. Therefore, it is opined that governments need to take substantial measures like imposing high tax on unhealthy food consumption. Furthermore, there should a simultaneous approcah of educating individuals regarding health hazards of convience food.
Firstly, everyday we see increasing number of people geting sick out of this majority of casualities are sucmued to
obesity related problems such as heart attacks and diabates, Which leaves a enormous strain on medical field and population I would say a solution which can make an impact on tackling this is taxing the unhealthy and fat food.
For instance, today tobbaco tax genrally is at 15 % the idea behind it is it will keep the affordability ratio down and indirectly leads to less amount of deaths. A Similar taxation is required on this processed food which is really unhealthy and it will give some positive results.
Secondly, local adminstrations and groups need to come up with a plan for educating about eating healthy not only that but subsdizing fruits and vegetables. For example, in Denmark a similar movement is on the rise where healthy nutrion foods are much affordable than fast-food. Not only this but also interdoucing traffic light system on food packaging which can make grocery shoppers life easier and they can avoid certain items.
To conclude, there is a rise in health problems for individuals who yield to have a unhealthy diet. The only solution to overcome this problem is by taxing the junk food and susdizing the rich nutrious food which can give many fruitful results in future.
In a few countries, many people are suffering from health related issues by overconsumption of junk food. Therefore, it is opined that governments need to take substantial measures like imposing high tax on unhealthy food consumption. Furthermore, there should a simultaneous approcah of educating individuals regarding health hazards of convience food.
Firstly, everyday we see increasing number of people geting sick out of this majority of casualities are sucmued to
obesity related problems such as heart attacks and diabates, Which leaves a enormous strain on medical field and population I would say a solution which can make an impact on tackling this is taxing the unhealthy and fat food.
For instance, today tobbaco tax genrally is at 15 % the idea behind it is it will keep the affordability ratio down and indirectly leads to less amount of deaths. A Similar taxation is required on this processed food which is really unhealthy and it will give some positive results.
Secondly, local adminstrations and groups need to come up with a plan for educating about eating healthy not only that but subsdizing fruits and vegetables. For example, in Denmark a similar movement is on the rise where healthy nutrion foods are much affordable than fast-food. Not only this but also interdoucing traffic light system on food packaging which can make grocery shoppers life easier and they can avoid certain items.
To conclude, there is a rise in health problems for individuals who yield to have a unhealthy diet. The only solution to overcome this problem is by taxing the junk food and susdizing the rich nutrious food which can give many fruitful results in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...blems for individuals who yield to have a unhealthy diet. The only solution to ov...
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Line 9, column 245, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...od which can give many fruitful results in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16117216117 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84198793323 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622710622711 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2300874375 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.090909091 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306737253652 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111702408896 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513288143993 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144680745498 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489212008544 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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