Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Thanks to the proliferation of technology, our lives are now being more comfortable and convenient when our basics are covered by technological devices. Therefore, instead of going out for goods, people can use the internet as a alternative way to shop such as books, air tickets and blatantly groceries. This essay believes that the benefits of shopping online totally dominate its drawbacks when it provides us a more modern and faster means of trading.
The advantage that stands out the most of online buying is its fastness and ease. Indeed, while buying stuffs through the internet, all of the things that the customers need to do are only a few clicks and preparing money, waiting for shopper to ship them by hands. For example, if there are clients who want to buy things that are currently unavailable in their city, they can easily search for them through variety of websites and order it rather than book a ticket to fly to other country to possess them directly.
In contrast, many people might have a fear of being stolen the information when making online transactions. Reasonably, there has been a vast number of people who have lost their money for unknown reasons but probably relating to insecure trading on unauthorized websites. For instance, there was a case in Viet Nam when hacker hacked a woman's computer and took all the information and used up all the money in her credit card, for sure, he was jailed. Despite this crucial problem, clients could certainly avoid this by purchasing on eligible and certificated sites, basically, once they use eligible pages, there would be no longer harmful when using the internet to shop.
In conclusion, in spite of having a draw back of leaking information, people would surely prevent it and enjoy a more convenient and freer ways of spending their money on shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...r goods, people can use the internet as a alternative way to shop such as books, ...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ile buying stuffs through the internet, all of the things that the customers need to do ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94193548387 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64398085384 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61935483871 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.0116605645 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.272727273 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205821813131 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708230220116 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527062488696 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117931617513 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631561155751 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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