It is a common argument whether companies should build sports and social facilities for its local community or not? Many people would say that it's the government duty to provide such things. But it's my believe that companies especially the big ones must pay back to its local community to provide places where people could go enjoy and learn.
First of all, the companies will achieve their social responsibility goals when creating these facilities for their neighborhood. In addition, the companies will benefit greatly from hosting and sponsored competitions and matches where they will get a huge media coverage which will increase the popularity of the company, therefore, increase its revenues.
Furthermore, a company that build sports facilities that will mean a lot in the eye of government authorities, science that providing such a places for local communities to go to during their spare time will prevent especially children on poor areas from selling drugs or involving in illegal activities because they will be playing football, tennis and other sports games that will fill their time with useful things. Moreover, when a company create a social center on the local areas it will help many people especially the poor ones, by providing social services that they cannot afford. For instance, children who comes from low income families might be forced to engage in sexual activities which will caus mental illnesses that need immediate help so it doesn't stuck with them for a lifetime possibly.
At the end, it is my findings that companies should start building sports and social facilities for their local communities, because of all the positive impacts that it brings for both the company and the local communities. Also, companies should look for the humanitarian side of these actions, and not only focusing on the business side of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19867549669 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63833113793 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53642384106 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.7476975188 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.0 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323964669951 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155941179889 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118478744519 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218965408182 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824673246346 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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