The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other field s by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition.
The subject of competition and cooperation remains a complex issue in our community today. How do we prepare young people for leadership? By instilling a sense of cooperation? or competition? Although, the disparity on this subject matter might endure as long as we have diversity in our cultures. Some sects would agree that competition brings out the best in young people as they tend to reach out for the best by being relentless and persistent in their pursuit. However, this would have a negative effect when most dreams are not actualized of fulfilled. This suggest the reason why psychologist believe that an environment with high competition will tend to produce depression in some people and enthusiasm in some people. Considering these evidences and proofs, I believe the best way to prepare young people for leadership, not limited to government and industry is to instill a sense of cooperation instead of competition s this will foster the growth of the community at large and also help individuals to improve ultimately.
Firstly, the importance of growth cannot be overemphasized both to an individual and the general community. Creating an environment that promotes cooperation will have a positive effect in the output on both the people and the company. For instance, production processes in most food industries are done together in order to increase productivity and efficiency. Research has proven that a group who work together will produce the best result in the end rather than working solitary. The most successful football team has been able to reach its peak today because the team play together and not otherwise.
The law of division of labor remains valid and importance to prepare people in taking up task in government and industry. A government that encourages cooperation will set a structure that will permit different young elite to take up different tasks and separate time intervals in order to prepare them for the future. The structure in the US educational system has proven that most research, particularly in the STEM departments are done interdisciplinary. The essence of this actually to increase productivity and also embrace knowledge from different astute minds.
The common saying no man is an island of knowledge is true to a great extent. working in an environment that encourages cooperation has a ripple effect on the emotions of the workers. Young people are known to be agile and full of strength. On the other hand, they are also mercurial in the attitude as they can be easily swing when things does not goes in their way. Thus, it is clear that when you work in an institution that embrace cooperation, there is a significant effect it has to keep you jovial and happy.
Nevertheless, competition has also produce positive effects amongst students in the school nd government. for example, the diversity in the number of political parties we have in our countries have shown that competition has helped to achieve an improvement in the economy and quality output of the nation. This case is also true for organizations. Many organizations tend to be improve their services when they face competition. However, even as this sound true, the extreme pf it has generated bitter hatred amidst and between workers in an industry, between industries and organizations. The overall outcome of cooperation cannot be overemphasize has it will ultimately help to adequately prepare young people for leadership.
In conclusion, young people are better prepare through instilling a sense of cooperation at all times.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2998.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 579.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17789291883 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90534594407 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01496036625 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47322970639 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 948.6 704.065955056 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.0265413294 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.379310345 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9655172414 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55172413793 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367933698675 0.243740707755 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950902250803 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104716576825 0.0758088955206 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183405043686 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100914255748 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 100.480337079 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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